'Raven Calls' Screenplay

Below is the next step in pre-production of our thriller opening after our pitch we've produced a screenplay for 'Raven Call's'. Hopefully once the end product has been made it will resemble this screenplay, enjoy.


INT. THERAPIST OFFICE - DAYTIME
The therapist office consists of little by way of furniture
apart from a desk with a chair on either side. The lighting
in the room is pretty dark (could be filmed in black and
white).
Two characters appear in the scene. The therapist (Amy
Hall) and her patient (Beth Newton)
THE CAMERA SHOWS A VIEW OF THE DESK, SHOWS AMY'S HANDS ON
HER LAPTOP. SHE CLOSES THE LID.
MEDIUM CLOSE UP: AMY LEANS FORWARD ON HER HANDS TO LOOK AT
A PATIENT OPPOSITE HER. THERE IS A SHOT REVERSE SHOT
BETWEEN THEM AS THEY START THEIR DIALOGUE

Amy: (calmly) why don't we start at
the beginning?
Beth: (avoids eye contact and
brings the sleeves of her jumper
over hands to show nerves) It was
only supposed to be a game, a
story. It wasn't supposed to be
real.
Amy: What wasn't?
Beth Raven Black...

CUTAWAY: THE CAMERA CUTS TO BETH READING A NEWS ARTICLE
CLOSE UP: THERE IS A CLOSE UP OF THE NEWS ARTICLE THE
HEADLINE READS 'ARE YOU AFRAID OF THE DARK? - MORE
MYSTERIOUS DISAPPEARANCES IN HALLOWS WOOD. IS THIS THE WORK
OF A HUMAN OR OF SOMETHING MUCH MORE SINISTER.
 
CUTAWAY: BACK IN THE THERAPIST OFFICE (CUT ALWAYS CONTINUE
THROUGH THE SEVENS KEEPING A FAST PACED FEEL TO THE OPENING
AS WELL AS KEEPING A NARRATIVE GOING)
 
INT. THERAPIST OFFICE - DAYTIME


Beth: The story goes...that years
ago a girl died in the woods, she
was in her early teens but as the
legend has it she was but a child
in her mind. No one knows how she
died but people say her presences
is strongly felt there...in Hallows
Woods...
EXT. THE WOODS - EVENING
Beth holds a camera pointing it at two friends as they walk
through the woods together. The footage is filmed by the
characters themselves.
Friend 1: Do you think she'll
appear?
Friend 2: Don't be stupid. It's
just a story.
Beth: So where have those people
gone?
 
 
INT. THERAPIST OFFICE - DAYTIME


Amy: You spoke of people going
missing.
Beth: (nods) Apparently if you Went
to the woods and said her name
three times she'd appear.
 
EXT. THE WOODS - EVENING
Friend 2: Say her name then.
Friend 1: I don't want to, it's
Beth's story not mine.
Beth: (laughs slightly) Aw, you
scared mate?
Friend 2: (mockingly) Do you want
us all to say it together?
All: Raven Black. Raven Black.
Raven Black.

 
NT. THERAPIST OFFICE - DAYTIME
Amy: Was this the game you spoke
about?
Beth: (nods) She was supposed to
appear and then you're meant to
sing a lullaby and she goes
away...goes to sleep...like a child
would...
Amy: What happened to your friends?
 
 
EXT. THE WOODS - EVENING
For a moment nothing happens the characters continue their
walk along the path.
Friend 2: (nervously/scared) What
is that?
 
THE CAMERA PANS SUDDENLY TO SHOW A FIGURE IN THE TREES
DRESSED IN A LONG WHITE DRESS/NIGHT GOWN. SHE IS TALL WITH
LONG HAIR AND A PALE FACE THAT APPEARS TO BE CRACKED LIKE
PORCELAIN. THIS IS RAVEN BLACK. (JESS EMMINGHAM). THE
CAMERA ZOOMS IN ON THE FIGURE.
Friend 1: (screams)
Beth: (not really believing what
she's seeing.) Oh my god...
Friend 2: it can't be...
 
Raven slowly starts to move towards them, the two friends
slowly start to back away. Beth stumbles and falls onto her
back.
 
 
INT. THERAPIST OFFICE - DAYTIME
Beth: The story said that if you
didn't finish the game she took
you...
EXT. THE WOODS - EVENING
Raven: (creepily singing Oranges
and Lemons...)
Beth: (scared) we have to play the
game...
 
She moves the camera around to show her friends leaving,
they run off and disappear leaving her stood alone. She
turns the camera back showing Raven still getting closer to
her.
Beth: (to her friends) come back...
(Her voice breaks in fear before
she turns back to Raven deciding
she must finish the game alone. She
shakily sings) Oranges and lemons
say the bells of St. Clement's...
 
INT. THERAPIST OFFICE - DAYTIME
Amy: You finished the game...
Beth: But they didn't...
Amy: Your friends were taken by a
ghost?
Beth: It was real...She was
real...if I hadn't played she
would've taken me too...don't you
understand?
Amy: I understand that you're
scared...but she's gone...
Beth: Is she though?
Amy: (Sits back, looks at something
behind Beth) almost definitely...
 
THE CAMERA MOVES OVER BETH'S SHOULDER TO REVEAL IN THE DOOR
WAY IS RAVEN.
 
TITLES APPEAR ON BLACK BACK GROUND WHILE LULLABY PLAYS.


 

 
 

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